2013年11月30日 星期六

Delete his D drive or not (Annotation 3)

  

  My first annotation is about public young people’s opinions from PTT or discussion boards, and my second is professional opinions from one report by W.H. Jung’s report (2012).

  My third annotation is about one TV show, Hot Issue (2011), hosted by Belle Yu and Sam Cen, popular host in Taiwan. In the TV show, this episode, why men like to watch adult videos, not only talked about why men watch adult videos but also interviewed one couple, Mia and Echo, who would watch adult videos together, and interview people between different age, generation and sex. 

  Mia and Echo, is the younger couple who believe watching adult videos would promote the feeling between lovers. In the interview, Echo said that sometimes his needs are too frequent; he would download the adult video beforehand, and watch it to vent physiological needs when Mia was taking a bath. In the interview, it also talked about the different point when men and women watch adult videos. Most men would focus on the action while most women would focus on the plot. 

There is another elder couple, Cool Dad and Cool Mom, who is married and having children. They would watch adult videos to promote their feeling with their children. Instead of forbidding them to watch adult videos, they would choose to let them watch and discuss with them to tell them the differences between video and reality. They sometimes also watch adult videos to add some interests in their daily lives.

Actually, it is natural for human to have demands. If the way they use to solve the demands without bothering others and don’t cause problems, I couldn’t figure out what is the point to forbid. 


Source:
Hot Issue(2011), Why men like to watch adult videos?  (Video)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bh19l0FamSk
  

1 則留言:

  1. Something I think you can revise:
    In paragraph 2:
    “hosted by Belle Yu and Sam Cen, popular host in Taiwan”→two popular hosts
    “In the TV show, this episode, why men like to watch adult videos,” → in this episode: why men like…
    “not only talked about why men watch adult videos but also interviewed one couple, Mia and Echo, who would watch adult videos together, and interview people between different age, generation and sex” → they talked about why men watch adult videos and interviewed many people with different age, generation and sex, which includes a couple, Mia and Echo, who would watch adult videos together. (I don’t know, the original sentence is ok)
    In paragraph 3:
    “Mia and Echo, is the younger couple” →u don’t have to put the comma
    “In the interview, it also talked about the different point” →they also talked… or the video also talked…
    “when men and women watch adult videos. Most men would focus on the action while most women would focus on the plot.” →Watch adult videos: most men…
    In paragraph 4:
    “Cool Dad and Cool Mom, who is married and having children” →a little strange, maybe u can write who is married for ? years if the video mentioned that
    “discuss with them to tell them the differences between video and reality” →in order to let them know the differences
    “They sometimes also watch adult videos to add some interests in their daily lives.” →Aside from this, watching adult videos is also one way for them to add interests in their lives
    Last paragraph:
    “If the way they use to solve the demands without bothering others” →demands won’t bother

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